My Rotten Red Headed Older Brother-Jenna Kirschner

  • Exposition

    This story is about a girl and her brother that are always having compitions to see who is better at things. The setting is at Trisha and Richard's house. The main characters are Richard(the brother),Trisha(the little sister), and Bubby(the grandmother).The conflict is Richard is better at everything and Trisha can't ever beet him.
  • Rising Action

    The rising action is they have a competition of who can eat the most rubhard.Trisha thought she could finally win at this. She believed she could win because it is really sour.Unfortionally her brother won. That night she made a wish on a shooting star that she could finally beat Richard at something.
  • Climax

    The climax is when a moving carnival comes and sets up in their backyard.It has a Merry Go Round set up.Richard and Trisha decide to have another compititon.The comptition is to see who can stay on the merry go round the longest. Trisha finally wins.
  • Falling Action

    The falling action is Trisha falls off the merrry go round because she was so dizzy.RIchard carries her all the way home.After he brings her home he runs and gets the docter.Tresha is o.k.
  • Comclusion

    The conclusionthey finally get along. They all lay down togther and talk. As they doze off Richard says"I'll always be four years older than you.